WALT choose words appropriate to writing purpose
Purpose: To Entertain
Our Success Criteria
- Use of adjective-noun with hyphen e.g. tall-story, biscuit-mugger
- Change line after after every idea
- Ideas are short - two or three well-chosen words
- Use some alliteration e.g. full-of-fib fever 21`
- Be true about the subject
- Select line starters carefully (a variety)
(Left to Right)
Georgia (Me) & Rosemary
Rosemary
Dancing sensation
Great imagination
Little bit crazy
Not very lazy
Talented at singing
Loves to go swimming
Ten-decibel yeller
Smile seller
Loves to be tidy
Really quite fighty
Netball legend
Can give people lessons
Such a great friend
Always wears the trends
When I walk around the bend
I see a great friend
Strikes a pose
I am so lucky to have Rose!
Hi Georgia, I loved this poem! You really summed up Rose beautifully with your choice of words. Lisa thought it was great too as it brought a tear to her eye. I've watched lots of Rosie's smiles lately at choir, pride assembly and kapa haka so she certainly is a smile seller! Mum xxx
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