Parris Goebel Report

This week I wrote a report on a famous New Zealand dancer. Her name is Parris Goebel. She owns The Palace dance studio. I really love dance and Parris Goebel is a role model of mine. I chose this piece of writing to blog because it is well edited and it can inform people on a person I love. We were learning to inform the reader with all the information that we researched and read. Above is a slide that shows pictures of her achievements and herself.

Report Success Criteria

• Structured well (paragraphs and subheadings)
• Vocabulary (best words and lots of topic words)
• Sentences (variety of different sentence starters)
• No personal pronouns
• Detail (added in lots of true information)
• Punctuation (helps the reader)
• Your own goal

Intro

22 year old Parris Goebel is a dancer who is meeting and working with celebrities thanks to her dancing career. Parris owns a dance studio in Auckland with her dad Bret which turns people into amazing dancers. Her crews have been to many competitions and performances. Heres some more information.

Early LIfe

Parris started dancing at an early age of 3. Ballet, Jazz and Hip hop were the 3 dances she did. At the age of 12 she quit Ballet and Jazz and committed herself to Hip Hop.  At 15 her Dad Brett pulled her out of school after a teacher said she needed to concentrate and write better essays. Her dad then thought she wants to dance and if that's what she wants as a future career, school won’t make her a better dancer. She then got offered a spot in  another dance crew but declined it and formed her own crew Request. She then opened “The Palace” dance studio with the help of her father.

Achievements

Her crews BubbleGum, Request, Sorority, Duchesses, Kings and Misfits have gotten many award at Regionals, Nationals and Internationals. The mega crew called the Royal family has  won gold, silver and bronze many times. In 2009 her crew Request won the varsity division. The following year she won the adults division. 2012 was one of Parris’ most full on years because she got hired  by Jennifer Lopez to choreograph her world tour called “Dance again world tour”. The Palace dance studio is one of the best studios in the world.  

Conclusion

Paris is learning to rap and DJ. She loves to make people drift into a special place when she dances. Dance is Parris’ life.

My favourite days of the holiday

First Favourite Day
My first day was really fun. I watched the musical bring it on with Rosemary. Rosemary's sisters Caroline and Maddie were really good dancers and I enjoyed watching all of their energy. I stayed the night at Rosie's house and played lots of fun games. We had Mc Donalds for dinner and a Mc Flurry for dessert.

Second Favourite Day
My next favourite day was spent with all my friends at Onekawa pools for Sophia's birthday. It was a sleep over. Sophia had hired the new inflatable and we were the first to test it out. Sophia and I started to dive off the end of the pool. I smashed my head against the bottom of the pool and man it hurt. We came home and had pizza for tea. We watched the teen beach movie 2. I had an enjoyable time.


Third Favourite Day
My third favourite day was when I went to Rosemary's party. We went to watch the movie home in the auditorium at Lindisfarne. We had popcorn, lollies, chips and fizzy drinks. The movie was very funny and I would highly recommend it to others. Breakers was the next place we went to . I ordered a chicken wrap and chips, a traffic light drink and a donut sundae for dessert.

Fourth Favourite Day
My fourth favourite day was when I had a movie day with my mum. I got out the movie Haunted House and the movie Mr Peabody and Sherman. We stopped at the supermarket to get lollies and popcorn. I snuggled up in my blankets and watched both of the movies. It was a great day to have a movie day because it was a very wet and cold day.

Street Dance competition

I was in a dance competition a few weekends ago. In prelims we came second and in finals we came first. That means that my crew gets to go to Auckland to dance. I really enjoyed it and wanted to do it again.

Item

I was strolling to the hall and my hands were all clammy I tried to calm myself down, it didn’t work. I arrived through the door and BAM I was as nervous as a dancer on a stage in front of a 10,000 people.There were parents and kids already there. I said to myself, be brave Georgia, be brave. I stood on the stage and listened to the poems. I clapped and started to feel just a tiny bit more confident. It was time to do the dance move your body. I had energy to burst out that was desperate. I was getting more confident with every single move. After a while I was enjoying it so much I was giving it my best shot. It was my dance now with some other friends of mine it was to the song wild wild west. We had some funky cowboy hats on and some bandannas and very cool vests. I stood there in front of the crowd with my mates waiting for the music. The music started a I jumped around dancing my heart out and also counting the counts 5,6,7,8. I was puffing hard out “ha ha” but it still felt like I had lots and lots of energy left. The music went on for ages well at least I thought it did. I ran back to my place and started swaying side to side listening to poppy’s beautiful singing. It was room 7 time to sing know. I could smell the sweat that room 7 had dripping down their body. I was brave and started singing the best I can even though I was probably flat. After three courses we got to dance how ever we want. Me Blair, Paia and Tiaana all did back to back together it looked really cool. We did some duggie together and some clicks. The song stopped all of a sudden I thought to myself DJ Kory must have stopped the music “oh well”. I thought to myself I want to do it again. It was fun!!